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Post February 15th, 2007, 2:08 am

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Here it is. Another short story by Me.

As always, comments are more than appreciated. Doesn't matter whether you love it or hate it, any comments you wish to leave about Magic at Midnight can be placed here.

All copyrites to Magic at Midnight belong to me.

Thanks for your time.

Zachariah.
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Post February 17th, 2007, 8:31 am

Haven't had the time to read it yet - not so'd I'd be able to read it at my leisure and therefore be able to fully appreciate it - but I will.

My comments will be forthcoming once I've read it! :D
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Post February 17th, 2007, 1:59 pm

As usual I'm hooked - can't wait for the next bit, you've got my mind running in circles trying to figure out what the pulsating secret purchase is likely to be :D
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Post February 17th, 2007, 4:02 pm

I'd like to announce my intention to marry Tannith!!!

Well, I would if I wasn't married already *grin*

Without fail, you read everything I write, and always comment on it. I'm grateful that you are in this world, if only to stroke my ego once in a while. You are so my own private stalker! Love ya sweety! *Hugs*

I'll put up the second part on sunday.
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Post February 17th, 2007, 4:10 pm

Phew! I thought we had a bigamist in our midst for a nano second until I read the rest of your post :lol:

Your personal stalker hmmm???? That I can do :dflame :dlaugh
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Post February 20th, 2007, 8:39 pm

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

My only criticism is, if I am correct in believing that he is English/Maltese, that there are a few words that are American English rather than English English eg trash can, but as far as the story is going, well bring it on, it's brilliant!
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Post February 21st, 2007, 1:14 am

I know...I know...

I've been living in the US too long. I've picked up their lexicon!!!

I'm sorry! *hangs head in shame*
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Post February 21st, 2007, 7:08 am

Well no, there's no need to be embarrassed by it, I know how it is I pick up accents really easy if I spend a lot of time talking to someone with a pronounced accent, I just thought I would mention it as it does lead (well for me) to a little confusion - probably me just being picky really. With or without the Amecianisms it is excellent.

May be a book of short stories, hmmm?
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Post February 21st, 2007, 3:52 pm

Kind of thinking along those lines atm.

Maybe if I can get some interest in these, I'll have the impetus to work on my novel.
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Post February 22nd, 2007, 8:05 am

I had tried to post a reply last night, but our server seemed to crash :?

So, yes a book of short stories sounds good to me.

I like both of the ones you have put on here, but I think I like this second one more, even though nothing has really happened yet. It has really grabbed my interest (I am still contemplating what the secret, pulsating purchase could be :) ).

I see you have added another part to it; I don't have time to read it now (got to get ready for work, I'm afraid), but I will read it later when I get home, hmmm, yes, don't suppose I am really going to have time to sneak a read at work today, so think it will have to wait until tonight :( But looking forward to it very much :D :D :D
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Post February 22nd, 2007, 8:19 pm

:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Yep, I've read part 3 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Waiting (patiently) for the next bit :D
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Post February 23rd, 2007, 3:20 am

*L* Tannith, you rock. Read the pm I'm sending you!
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Post February 23rd, 2007, 7:43 am

Oh, and now part 3 has had time to permeate ........ An angel body part!!!!!!!!!!! Cooooooollllllllllll!

(Still patiently waiting - okay, I lie, I'm not that patient, so may be just waiting with bated breath :D )
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